This is my new story, which might have some strong references to .Hack, and I do not claim any ideas that may be similar to .Hack as my own. Now for the do's and nots
Do...
-Tell your friends to read this. (As well as my other story which still lacks comments xD)
-Read this/suggest ideas
-Criticize

DON'T, I repeat DON'T!
-Sell this
-Claim I stole .Hack ideas as my own, because obviously you didn't read the first sentence >_<
-Copy this and claim it as your own
-Say it sucks for no reason whatsoever
Enjoy :3
(First Edit thx to ori)
(Thank you everyone who's been constantly getting me to finish this one up, hope to be done by my 17th B-day)


A dream...a dream is sometimes what we all want to make true. Everyone wants their dreams to come true, heck I still want my dreams to come true. Before I knew it, one of my childhood dreams came true. When I was only a kid, I would always play all sorts of Massive Multi-player Online games, MMO for short. I played almost any MMO my friends played, and yet, I never felt much joy out of playing them. I wanted them to be more realistic, like you could jump into the game. I wanted to be part of all the action, as in me, the real me. That was my dream when I was a kid.

I'm fifteen now, and recently, a new corporation had begun creating an MMO like no other. An MMO that allows the players mind to jump in the game. The mouse was now the players' minds, and they could move through them using their own hands. You can even attack in any manner you'd like, by performing all sorts of aerobics as you pleased, and even fight in any style you wished. Nothing was forced on you, and you could do anything in this MMO...no...not MMO...this world! My dream had come true....and turned into a nightmare before my eyes. My name is Felix, both in the MMO and in the real world, and this is my story about my nightmare.

May 31st, 2013
The long, awaited bell had rung, and everyone began running out of their classes. Summer Break finally began, and I was quite excited to finally have leave school for a full three months. Even though, I made straight A's in most of my classes, and made it to the top ten in my class, I never felt proud to be in school at all. I felt that it was a prison most of the time, wishing I could have joined some of the better classes out there such as Fencing or maybe even Track and Field. Sadly, my parents always looked over the classes I pick, and they'd force me to change some of my decisions to classes that they'd like me to be in. My parents never did this to my younger sister, April. I figured she was being "Their Little Angel" whenever they went to complain about some of her classes. I found myself sighing the moment I exited the school, right in front of my group of friends.

"What's the matter?" Kaley asked.

I looked up, and answered, "I've felt like I just wasted another year of school on classes I didn't want, that's all..." Immediately I got tackled by Alex, the younger brother of Cathal, who was about two years younger than everyone of us in the group. I fell to the ground hitting my head against the school wall, and muttered, "What the heck was that for?"

Alex smiled, "Silence! You have no right to be despairing when Summer Break has just started! Come on man! Cheer up! Who cares!?" Alex ranted on and on, and by the time I got up, I noticed Ryuseii, a recent exchange student, slap tape on Alex's mouth. Duct tape I might add. Cathal laughed at the site of his brother trying to take the tape off without inducing so much pain.

"Nice job man, give me five!" As Cathal stood with his hand in the air, Ryuseii just stared blankly at him. Cathal stood the way he was, looking increasingly agitated by the second until Ryuseii finally tapped his hand against Cathal's. Cathal finally at ease decided to ask, "So what are we gonna do over the summer?"

Kaley suggested, "How about test out that new MMO that just came out?"

"Yea! I heard it's a breakthrough in online gaming! We have to all get one before they run out!"

Alex, finally ripping off the piece of tape, exclaimed, "I already have the money with me to get one right now! I'm already ecstatic to get one!"

"Well, let's start heading to the Game Mart then!" We all did on Cathal's motion, getting excited about what it will be like to actually be in the gaming world. Along the way, I began to think about the group of friends I had all of a sudden, how it was really, an interesting bunch. Alex help made everything annoying, yet interesting most of the time. Cathal who usually lightened up the mood, and help get us started on what to do for the day. Kaley, being the only girl in our group, was probably the most caring compared to the rest of us. Ryusei barely talked and acted differently from the rest of us, maybe because we only knew him for a few months and he was still getting used to his surroundings. Finally, there's me, the one who tries to be happy of life when I'm actually not.

"Felix, wake up! We're here!" Alex shook me, when I realized we stood in of Game Mart, everyone waiting for me to enter. As I entered, Game Mart was apparently larger and more spacious than last time I went here, probably due to another growth in the gaming industries from the majority of the population now playing their products. We began heading to the "Online Gaming" section, and the only thing that was being sold was apparently "Legends of the World", the MMO that we've been talking about as we headed our way their. To my surprise I saw April exiting the store with a copy of the game. She was with a few of her friends, who apparently got the game as well.

She noticed me and waved, "Hi Felix! See ya at home, okay?"

I replied, "Sure, see ya home." She seemed to pout at my bland reply, and she walked off.

"Your sister's hot.." I immediately glared at whoever said those words, to my surprise, it was Ryusei. I felt a cold wind blow by as I stood in horror.
Alex soon added, "You know... your sister actually is hot! I call dibs!" He began smiling, and I wanted to kill him for that.

Instead, I informed, "Dibs on killing you." He noticed the deathly glare I gave him, and he slowly backed away into the "Online Gaming" section. Cathal and Kaley were trying not to laugh at what had just happened, and I couldn't blame them. Everybody finally decided to join Alex, while I decided to wait a good minute or two to recover. Soon, I joined them, and I couldn't believe what I saw. High-definition plasma TV's were on the wall, showing gameplay of Legends of the World , and next to that, half of the section was filled with people buying the game. I eventually was able to find everyone in the horde of people, and saw all of them holding a copy of the game.

"I thought only Alex and Cathal were getting a copy of the game?" were the words that came out of my mouth.

Kaley replied, "Well, I wasn't going to get the game until later, until I found is now only twenty-five dollars, which is exactly what I had on hand."

Ryusei added, "I never said I wasn't going to buy it." Again, I was caught off guard by Ryusei talking, but I didn't have any money at all to get the game, once again thanks to parents making all my decisions.

"Aren't you going to get a copy of Legends of the World?" Kaley asked.

I answered, "I can't, I don't have the money. I probably won't make enough before they get sold out at this rate it seems."

"Oh, I'm sorry... I hope you're able to get it soon. It won't be the same without you in the game."

Cathal added, "Ya, I'll say. The last MMO we did without you just didn't have the same excitement in it."

I replied, "Don't worry guys, I'll ask my parents if I can get twenty-five dollars before the store closes. Text ya guys later." Everyone waved goodbye to me as I ran out of the store. The moment I got out of the store, I got a phone call from April, and I quickly answered my cell phone. "Hey April, how come you didn't text?"

She exclaimed, "You won't believe what Dad just got! Get over here now!"

"Okay, okay, sheesh, be there in a few." I put away my cell phone, running towards home. After a five minutes of non-stop running, I arrived home, without breaking too much of a sweat thanks to running a few miles on the weekends. As I rang the door bell, the door flung open, and April grabbed my hand, nearly dragging me across the floor to the kitchen. April finally let go of me, and I stood in front of both my parents.

My mom cried, "I'm so proud of you! You're in the top ten of your class, oh if only your sister was like you!" Immediately, my mother hugged me so tightly, I could barely breathe. After she let go, my dad pat my shoulder.

He added, "Son, we're both proud of you, and you know of my new job working for E. X. Corporation, right?" I nodded, and he continued, "My boss asked me if I'd like to give a special copy of Legends of the World that's currently undergoing testing. It contains a special class type which you may use, and it has a special feature that allows you to project your actual body into the game, rather than go through the details of customizing a character unless you'd like to. I'd like you to have to have this as a congradulations gift." He held out the beta-copy he told me about, and I gently took it from him.

I smiled, "Thank you. I'm really glad that both of you are proud of me, and I'll continue to do my best in school." My parents smiled, and as I went out of the kitchen, April went in front of me before I could get to my computer.

She asked nicely, "Add me when you get online, will you? I already made my character, and her name is April Excalibur!" I looked at her confused.

I asked, "Why did you use your real name in your character's name?"

"Because! Since I'm actually getting into the game, and everything feels real, I'd rather be called by my name rather than something else. You should do it too! Except don't use the second part of my character name, cause that's copying my idea!"

"Okay fine, let me download this, okay?" She let me go to my room, and as I opened the cartridge, all I found was a pair of goggles. I began reading the manual that was included, and apparently, the goggles automatically connect my mind to the game, requiring no use for internet connection or a computer. Before I entered the game, I text messaged my friends that I got a copy of the Legends of the World from my dad, and when they get on, add Felix, which was oddly not taken when I checked the site saying what names were taken and many statistics such as how many of this class was in game and such.

After sending the message to my friends, I put on the goggles while resting on my bed. I was floating in a giant empty box , where I found only one class type available for me to pick, called Reaper of Light, as well as the 'insert name here' box. I figured this was what class was to be tested, and the moment I picked that class and entered my name with my thoughts. I immediately saw myself in the middle of a town. I looked at myself, realizing I was in the game already. An in-game tutorial appeared right in front of me as a floating menu that I could scroll through with my mind and hands. I would press all sorts of tabs attached to it, learning more and more information on how to play the game. By the end of the tutorial, it told me to draw my weapon, and I did so. I had pulled out a scythe out of nowhere, and many people around me gasped.

A random player called Newbinator1104 cried, "The rumors are true! It's the Reaper of Light!"

Everybody stared at me, as if I were a famous professional at this game. I stood still, wondering why or what could have made everyone react like that. I eventually gave up, and slowly walked away from the center of the town. However, some of the crowd decided to follow me. Agitated by this, I asked, "What? Is there something about me that apparently amazes you? I'm just testing out this beta-class, so please just..."

"You obviously haven't read the fan forums from this game, have you?" I looked around to see where the voice came from. "Up here, silly!" I looked up to find a female player perched on one a building to my side. She hopped down to the ground in a graceful manner. I noticed as she landed, however, the people who stalked me had fled at the site of her. She smiled, "The names Violet.~" I gave her a smile back, and she giggled. "Follow me!" She immediately began running off towards the outer parts of the town, and I followed her not really knowing any objectives I should be accomplishing at the moment.

As I caught up to her, I asked, "What do you mean by what you said earlier, about the forums?"

Violet laughed, "Why, it's because you're mentioned quite a bit in them! The topic has been only a few days old, and practically everyone reads the forums since it's a feature for the game to access them with your mind as well."

"Huh...so what did the forums tell about me?"

"The forums are talking about a legend that was mentioned in a part of this game, in a level ten quest I believe. I'm only level five, which is why I don't fully understand it. Anywho, the legend mentions about somebody who held a scythe. Apparently, this person was a legendary hero, who purified the "World" we live in. He journeyed with many friends on his adventure, and after the adventure, he just disappeared, but he vowed to one day return. See the connections when all of a sudden you appear with a scythe?" I noticed we had kept walking until we were at a field a good distance away from town.

"Ah...I see, well thanks for the info, I'm going to head back to Tutorial Town now." As I began to turn around, an arrow flew past me. I turned around to see Violet holding a bow. I immediately knew what was going to happen next. "A player-killer, how predictable. Can't believe I fell for a pretty face like yours," I scoffed. "How many fell for it and got PK'ed?"

She grinned, "Hehe, you're number ten.." I pulled out my scythe, and immediately a barrier surrounded the two of us. A crowd of people began to form around the circle every passing second.

I mocked, "Isn't it a bit unfair to attack someone eight levels under you?" She frowned at me, and fired an arrow at me. I thought I could dodge it, but I got hit in my arm, which made me feel a jolt of pain. I resisted not trying to yelp, as I stared at the arrow that pierced my arm slowly disappear.

"What's the matter? Can't fight me? I guess it makes sense since you're just a newb!" She fired another arrow at me, this time it was surrounded by a blue aura. I managed to dodge it by rolling to the side, and when the arrow hit the barrier, it exploded and I was able to feel some of the aftershock from it. Immediately, I was hit by another arrow, this time in the chest. I began to feel like I was going to throw up, and an HP alert menu appeared in front of my eyes. I had only one HP left. I crumpled to the ground, knowing I couldn't win. Violet laughed, "Heehee! You really are just a newb! Nothing from that legend at all!"

"Don't listen to her Felix!" I looked up, to see someone on the other side of the barrier. The person looked similar to my sister, but I just pretended I was hallucinating from adrenaline and pain. "It's me! April Excalibur! You can beat her! It doesn't matter if you don't have any skills, you still have your mind! Use that to your advantage, please!" I couldn't believe it was actually April, and I knew she had to be right. I couldn't give up, not now. I slowly got up, only to be laughed at by Violet, when I began thinking out a strategy.

I first thought about how Violet attacks, and I knew I couldn't dodge her arrows. I then thought about the skill she used and how I was able to dodge it, because the aura around it slowed it down. I knew I could win this, and I readied my scythe with my plan ready.

I exclaimed, "Not bad, but I'm still standing!"

Violet smirked, "You wish.." She fired what she thought was her last arrow, but I knew would be her second last attack. I spun my scythe in front of me right before she fired, and I made my scythe to gain enough momentum to swirl in front of me to make it a poor man's shield. The arrow was deflected by my maneuver, and I smiled proudly. April cheered me on, and Violet couldn't believe what I just pulled off. She retorted, "That's it, try deflecting this!" She used the skill I hoped she would use, and I immediately jumped right above the arrow, followed up with me spinning in the air and throwing my scythe right at Violet. My scythe hit right on target, Violet getting slashed and knockedback by my scythe, being shoved into the barrier, which damaged her even further. She laid on the ground, weakened, as I landed on the ground, slightly dizzy. After I recovered, I walked towards my scythe that stuck out of the ground, and looked at Violet. She was able to get herself up just a tad bit, up the point where she's kneeling.

I said, "Checkmate..." I lifted my scythe, and Violet closed her eyes, not wanting to see defeat in the eyes. I brought my scythe down with full force, and I did what had to be done. My scythe hit the ground right next to her, and I pulled it from the ground. The barrier began to fade, knowing I had won the match in an honorable manner.

Violet got up, and cried, "Why didn't you kill me! You know I can resurrect myself in town, nobody is that newb-ish to not know that!"

I answered, "Because... What good does PKing accomplish? I will never stain my hands with that kind of violence. Au revoire Violet.." Violet hid her face from the crowds of people that began having an uproar. I felt bad for her, so as I left her, I had a change of heart, and began to head back to her. She noticed me walking back to her, and I offered my hand to her. She hesistatingly took it, and I helped her up. I admitted, "That was a good fight however. If you want a rematch, tell me." As I said that, I began to blush, as I realized I never really knew how to add someone.

Violet giggled, "I'm guessing you don't know how to add people still. You just need to think about your friend menu, and then you think about the person you want to add." I followed her advice, and she appeared online on my friend list. I smiled, and she added, "See you later, and next time... I'll be the winner!"

I grinned, "I'll look forward to it!" She slowly disapppeared, due to her logging out.

"That was really nice of you Felix," smiled April

"Huh, I guess so...it feels good," I replied happily.

"You wanna know something else that's important?" I looked at her confused, realizing her smile became a frown. "The fact you still haven't added me even after Violet told you how!" She whacked my head immediately with the flat edge of a sword. I let out a cry of pain, not wondering what class she was after seeing her weapon.

I muttered, "Ow! Sorry! You could have knocked me out with that hit! I'm still in the low HP zone for crying out loud!" I rubbed my head, and she began to glare at me. I knew I couldn't please her at all, so I began going through the process of adding her. Soon after I added her, she accepted my request and we became friends. She giggled, "There! Now was that so hard?"

I grunted, "You and your mood swings..." She shrugged off what I said, and what could I do? She was my sister after all, younger sister I might add.

As we entered back into town, I got a friend request pop-up, and before I could see who it was, three other friend requests came into my request menu. I immediately knew who they were, so I accepted all four of them. Smiling, I began to start up a "thought" chat, where I put all four of my new friends into the chat. April looked at me a little confused, wondering what I was doing.

She asked, "Whatcya doing?" I tried to ignore her, but she continued, "Pleeeeaaaase! Tell me! I want to know!" She pulled out her sword, and immediately I thought, See you guys at the town square, sis is gonna kill me if I don't talk to her As I left the chat, I could have sworn I heard one of them thinking I would have gotten owned.

I answered before April got angry, "I'm heading to the Town Square, so see ya." She grabbed my hand before I could leave.

She asked softly, "Can I go with you..?" I had a feeling none of her friends added her, and she was all alone as well.

"Sure, why not! Let's go, I want you to meet my friends!" I just wanted her to be able to smile now, and she did. Before I could feel proud of myself, she began to drag me across Tutorial Town, until I was able to get on my feet and run at her speed to the town center. When we arrived there, we were actually the first ones to arrive, probably because we ran full-speed here. We ended up having an interesting conversation as well.

I asked, "So... What class are you?"

She cheered, "Why, I'm glad you asked!" She pulled out two swords from nowhere, both of them shrouded by a faint aura of darkness. "I'm a Dark Slayer, a dual-blade user! I also can use the element of darkness to my advantage as well!"

"Hehe, sounds like a cool class."

"That's because it is!" She bent towards me, as if she wanted to start up a rocus.

I played along, and joked, "Not as cool as my class!" I stuck my tongue out at her. She slapped me, and she turned away from me. I felt a burn come across my face, and I poked her at the side, which made her squeal like a mouse. I began to laugh, and she began to blush.

She cried, "That's not funny!" She tackled me, and tried pinning me to the ground. I pushed her onto her back, wrestling with her until I pinned her to the ground.

I blabbered, "To think, this is a no-PK zone, yet we can still have a childish fight."

She explained while struggling against my grasp, "That's because we are siblings, we aren't receiving damage, and the game thinks this is friendly PvP!" She pushed me off with her legs, and pulled my arm behind my back. She began to push my arm in a way where it began to actually hurt me.

I pleaded, "Okay, okay! Mercy, your class is better!" She let go, and I began to move around my shoulder. "Jeesh..."

She giggled, "Heehee, I guess that makes me a better player than you!" At this being said, I was able to hear someone laugh in the distance. I began to blush knowing we were being watched.

I retorted, "Who are you!? Come out here and fight me if you want to laugh at me!" A tall, armored man stood at the northern section of the town center. He had dark, green hair, and his armor looked rather bulky yet dull on him. Next to him stood three others, each different in their own way. Out of the other three, one was a girl, the other two were guys. The girl had blonde hair coming down to her shoulders, had something similar to a white robe, and to my surprise, wings on her back. One guy had messy, black hair, with a black leather mail on him, as well as a black cloth mask that covered his mouth. The last guy had clothing that had metal pads at certain parts, a giant sword attached to his back, and sleek, black hair. After noticing these qualities of appearance, a puzzle that formed in my head began to come together piece by piece. I cried, "Guys! Is it really you!?" All four of them began heading to the center where me and April stood, smiling at me.

Sky said, "Yep, it's us! Glad to see you on already!"

Origin added, "Hehe, yea!"

Lan smiled, "Haha, I still can't believe you got owned by your sister."

Kane whispered, "Hey..." We all began to talk about how it was like when we first got on this, especially how exilerating it felt like to finally be aprt of the game.

April asked, "Um...Okay I'm confused, who's who?"

I smiled, “Everybody, meet April, my sister. April these are my friends. Guys introduce yourselves, will ya?"

Lan gloated, “I’m the master of all things great and powerful! Nobody can stop the power of me! Lanus!"

Kane added, "I’m Kanetsugu Hoshigaku, and pleased to meet you April…” He paused for a second, and added, “You may call me Ka-ne if you can't remember my full character name."

Origin exclaimed, "I'm Originlord! Wielder of the heavy blade, and I shall not bow down to evil even when I face death himself!”

Sky nodded, and replied, "Yep, but call me Sky or Skylock in game if that's okay."

April smiled and bowed slightly, "Pleased to meet all of you." Everybody replied with the same phrase, and we hung out in the center for some time, just talking and doing nothing so far.

Origin finally decided to ask, "So, what do you guys want to do?"

April suggested, "Wanna go customize what our characters wear?" We all looked at her a little confused, and she explained, "There's no armor that you buy in game because of the special level up system in this game, so we can go to the customization shop, where we may customize what our characters wear in game. I read this in a forum just to let you know." We all ended up agreeing on the notion.

Lan challenged, "Race ya guys there! Last one's a rotten egg!" He began running, quite slowly I might add due to his armor, and everyone sped right past him. In about a minute, we all arrived at the customize shop, excluding lan of course. It took him two minutes to get there. As we all entered in the customization store, we saw a black wolf in the room, two players staring at it with awe. Their names were I S2 Dogs, while the other was Powner200.

S2 squealed, "Awwwwww! A doggy!!!"

Powner muttered, "That's not a doggy... It's a monster... I think..."

"Eeeeep!" S2 ran out of the store, crying like she saw a ghost or something. To my surprise, I could hear the wolf sigh, and he slowly began to head out of the store. He ran past the six of us, and came to a stop, staring at me for a few seconds. The look on those eyes felt human…in a way at least. The wolf began running away from the shop, and many people began to cry at horror at the site of a wolf in town, thinking there’s a monster invasion maybe.

Lan panted, "You'd think that wolf would have gotten killed by now, don't you think?"

Origin added, “Huh, I wonder what that wolf even is doing here… I don’t think it could be a monster… Could it?”

April complained, "Are you guys going to talk all day or are we going to customize now?"

We began to finally move on to the NPC. I commented, "This is gonna be fun." As I began to request to customize my character, the NPC offered if I'd like to have my preference to be automatically placed onto my character. The only option was yes, and I figured that it was another feature to the Reaper of Light class. I accepted, and lights began to shroud my character. As I looked at myself, my body glowed with a bright white, everyone staring at me, including my friends and sister.

After the light show, I looked like I wore a mix between modern day clothing and light armor. I wore white, fingerless gloves, a black gauntlet-like pad on my right arm or my "good" arm, arm bangles going across my left arm, and a white leather vest, the vest being left open to show a black chain mail that looked more like a black shirt under my white shirt. All of that made up my upper body, until I noticed I had a ring of a scythe on my right hand. As for my lower half, I wore black pants with black belts strapped to some parts of my legs, while I wore black platforms that had a pure white buckle on the side. I felt so different, and I couldn't believe the way I looked once a mirror appeared in front of me. I really loved the look, and everyone stared at me strangely.

Lan asked in a surprised manner, "Woah! How did you do that so fast?”

I explained, “The character I have is actually beta-testing a special class, as well as some new features. Does that make sense?”

Origin asked, “Wait a second…Is your class by chance the Reaper of Light?” I nodded slowly, and he began pointing at me, “Dude, no way! How did you get access to beta-testing that? I heard it’s off-limits to anybody, even to GM’s!”

“My dad got it for me…He said it got it from E. X. Corp for being a good worker. Something wrong with that?”

“O jeez dude…I hate to say this, but there’s been a recent thieving of a special copy of this game…” His words stung me, and I could not believe my dad could have actually stolen this game for me. Why would he do such a thing?

April whimpered to me, “You don’t think dad…?”

I cursed, “O god! Why would my dad steal this?! Sorry guys, but I’m logging out now, I want to get some answers…” As I began to select log out on the menu, the moment I try to press log out, I get the sensation of floating back into the real world, but I immediately return back in game.

Kane uttered frightfully, “That can’t be good…”

April asked, “If it’s okay, I’m gonna log out now… Where can I find you Felix?”

I felt myself becoming surrounded by pain and agony, fearing I can’t go back to the real world. I muttered weakly, “You’ll find me in my room… Please ask dad why he did this also…” She slowly vanished away, and I began to cry, feeling like I just abandoned a part of me.

Origin shuddered, “I wondered why it was off-limits… Now I wish I didn’t have to find out this way…”

Sky cried sympathetically, and hugged me. “I’m sorry Felix… I hope everything works out.”

Lan informed, “Felix, if you want me to leave, I will, because I know I’m never a comforting kind of guy sometimes, so please just tell me if you want me to just leave you alone, okay..?” I nodded, still crying even when there are many players still staring at my pain.

I asked painfully, “Why…? Why Father!? Why!? God….why…?”

End of Chapter Three
Author's note!
I want you guys to customize your own character! You can do whatever you want for looks, as long as it's appropriate, and you may only design your character.
This won’t be mentioned in story probably, but may help give everyone a better sense of what everyone is like. I might make this into a different topic as well so please post the character customization in that post.
P.S. What is not Alex anymore >_< Alex/Lan is nobody on this forum really x.x

You have have knocked me out with that hit!

Make any sense?

Sure, why not!?

Those were originally quotes. But, now they're not. :/ I guess you'll have to find them?

What, one request next time you edit (Although I really love the help! ) Please do it all in one post x.x I'm getting annoyed by having to read one post and make the edit, then find another post and make the edit and rinse and repeat. Capeach?

As for Sure, why not!? I don't think a question mark is really needed because it's a rhetorical question. As well as an expression. But I might change if i feel like it needs a ?

As for the I get the sensation of floating back to the world, but I immediately return back in game. Did you mean to bold get? I don't really know what you meant by that quote/edit x.x

Anywho thank you again! Also for future reference, here's the "Thank you for editting/helping!" list.

Originlord (Thank you for editting prologue and helping with many class types!)

What/OVHH (Thank you for editting chapter three :3)

The get part, get's got. Not get. You have to make it got.

Oooooh okay, ty

What, I hope ur happy

Alex/Lan is not What anymore

Alex's avatar is now Lan, not what

I hope you guys don't get confused cuz of this x.x Please comment that you've read this update.

Got my hopes up. New Post! Not part of story.

Nope, I'm almost there though, but g2g in 30 minutes so i don't wanna rush it

and again people comment on this update
Alex/Lan is not What anymore

Alex's avatar is now Lan, not what

I hope you guys don't get confused cuz of this x.x Please comment that you've read this update.

So...I'm not a perv. Yesh! Ori is the perv!