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PostSubject: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:15 am

I noticed no one has yet posted any comments on Silver Chronicles, and I do appreciate everyone keeping the story uninterrupted,
but I do think some of you might want to say something sometimes about it so I made this topic for it.
That's all really.

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:18 am

i it is pretty good

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Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
The Force shall free me." - Sith Code as taught by Darth Bane

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:19 am

Hooray! Ori finally feels my pain!!!! Very Happy
Anywho, if I must be honest, I have yet to read through a lot of it, but from the parts I have read, I'm liking it! I'm also liking the new ideas you incorporated such as a bit of background info to what's going on at the top of each section.

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:20 am

Awesome, I'd like to hear more of your thoughts the further you read into it. wee

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:22 am

wait, so my comments don't count as commentary....~gasp~ i am insulted

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Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:23 am

When I said "your" I meant ya'lls commentary, but it sounds weird.

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:27 am

What, y'all don't like red-neck talk? Sad

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:28 am

Well it's just that if I say ya'll, everyone would instantly know I'm a southerner, and I'd like to keep where I live on the net very secretive.
Also I'm still working on fixing a lot of grammar mistakes throughout the story so bare with me on that part. silent

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:33 am

Ori. My story has a crudload of typos/grammar errors. I think people can live Very Happy And if in doubt, do what I do, story clean up! =P *Which I will do after the arena chapter*

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:15 pm

dude you really need to continue this story once you have the time, it has really good potential and you left it at an a-hole style cliff-hanger

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Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Tue Aug 16, 2011 10:34 pm

Really? I didn't know anyone still read it. Which was why I left it to die off.

Well I did work on it a bit and have the continuation stored on my comp. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:33 am

@Ori: Now you know the pain of being a writer. Very Happy (Points to almost all the story entries I've put on the site)

Heck, I think the only story I got remotely close to completing 100% was Valkyrie War, due to Shadow and Emo posting replies every update.

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Wed Aug 17, 2011 5:31 pm

I feel your pain Felix...

Again, we need more people here.

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:31 am

NobleSy wrote:
I feel your pain Felix...

Again, we need more active people here.


Fixed. :3 But agreed.

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PostSubject: Re: Silver Chronicles Commentary   Sat Aug 20, 2011 4:47 pm

I'm planning to write a book on Silver Chronicles (Actually it's called Fractal Soul for about 3 months now, just never changed it online) but I don't see how I can avoid copyright laws (Chuck Norris and Care Bears) without dulling the humor.

*Off Topic* Are you writing any books?

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