Please clarify with me if it is or is not. I just want to know what I did wrong, because I don't see how it's vague, probably because I'm the author, but I just want to know where the vagueness is. I swear. *Read my new winter goal to see why I'm awfully distressed atm. Should be a new post.*

Never Lose Your Sight

Gather around, I have much to tell
About the tales of the heart and mind.
Ah, how the two are so quarrelsome,
Even at the worst of times to come.

The mind often can mislead oneself
Into a path they wish not to step on.
Yet, the path could prove most valuable
And profitable in the long run.
Smart decisions are the mind’s strong point.

The heart often can misguide oneself
Through the corridors of love and pain.
Yet, there’s much to experience
In the corridor, where all life occurs.
Passion and life are the heart’s strong point.

There are some who choose the heart,
While there are others who choose the mind.
Do not pick a side, I tell you.
It will only hasten your downfall.
This downfall is the loss of sight.

It’s not the physical loss of sight.
No, the blind can prove to have much sight.
Losing one’s sight is quite worst than blindness,
For it is the loss of one’s soul.

The soul cannot exist alone.
It needs both body and mind to thrive.
Without balance between the two,
How can the soul hope to survive?

It is quite hard sometimes to decide
Whether the body is right or wrong,
Or whether the mind is right or wrong.
The decisions are quite tought indeed,
But sometimes, acting blindly is best.
Do what comes out by the strong will
Eminating from the cries of your soul.

What if you can’t make the decision?
Quite a well said question, really.

All I can say is to stay strong,
And to never lose sight of yourself.

I think it's pretty good. Perhaps he said it was too vague because it doesn't concentrate on one single point?
Or the point was too generalized?

I've got to check with him on it...before that rant final poem possibly.