Excalibur Knights

Subject: Re: Excalibur Knights Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:56 pm

Bump I still haven't gotten any comments >_>

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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Subject: Re: Excalibur Knights Thu Oct 28, 2010 9:06 pm

Wthh, it's been a year now o.o Along with a couple of months! DX

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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Subject: Re: Excalibur Knights Wed Jan 18, 2012 2:15 pm

Alright, going to ask this once: Can I just delete this? It serves no purpose, and I lol'd at whoever de-famed me in all my story posts o.o

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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Subject: Re: Excalibur Knights Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:59 pm

Sure, it's your story. I have to admit that the site is pretty darn dead.
Maybe you'll get more feedback at a forum that specializes in stories and stuff?

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"Jesus promised to get rid of the wicked people, Odin promised to get rid of the ice giants. And I don't see many ice giants around these days." - Whtrz, London, 19/5/2011 09:38

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Subject: Re: Excalibur Knights Wed Jan 18, 2012 6:15 pm

I wanted feedback from my friends. I'd rather not have to go to some forum where I don't know anyone, and sure, they may give feedback of all sorts, but how do I not know that it will be stolen?

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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Subject: Re: Excalibur Knights Wed Jan 18, 2012 7:00 pm

Yea...I guess I'm not a good friend if I can't even read your story.

...okay I read the prologue. You put in "their" where "there" is suppose to be.

I think it would look better if each sentence that didn't refer to Isaac as "he" but "Isaac" starts off a new paragraph instead of it being clumped together.

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"Jesus promised to get rid of the wicked people, Odin promised to get rid of the ice giants. And I don't see many ice giants around these days." - Whtrz, London, 19/5/2011 09:38

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Subject: Re: Excalibur Knights Thu Jan 19, 2012 9:01 am

Gotcya on things to fix (wrote it in middle school, so I definitely see the errors I made just from first glance).

And I didn't mean to insinuate you guys were bad friends for not reading this story (or other stories I may have posted here), it just bummed me out that no one really took notice to my first actual novel that I wrote in middle school got posted here. Except for What, ironically.

So don't worry about having to read it to be a 'good friend.' A good friend would just flat out tell me whether they'd read this or not (which is what I attempted to get from the several bumps I made) And it's just the fact I put this on the forum for you guys, but if you guys aren't reading it, then why bother putting it on the site at all?

That's all that's bothering me; not the idea that since you guys aren't reading my stories, that makes you guys horrible friends. You guys are good friends :3 I just don't like having stories on the internet up for grabs when nobody I know is reading it.

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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Subject: Re: Excalibur Knights Mon Jan 30, 2012 7:03 pm

@Wing's post 3 posts ago.....LOL you don't remember that time i "abused" my admin ability to defame? You and me got into this defame war. You defamed me once a day for 10 days so i defamed you 150+ over the course of a couple days. XD lol, good times...goood times XD

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Subject: Re: Excalibur Knights Mon Jan 30, 2012 9:15 pm

Kay, fk it, this is getting deleted. o.o

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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