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so...when is the next update gonna be?

Later tonight hopefully.

sweet!

dude? hope you post it soon...

I said tonight. Morning's not coming any sooner, but I ended up watching Step Brother's, so as an apology, here's what I've got so far. And I'm fast at this :3

Chapter Three: Rebirth

After what felt like years of waiting had come to an end, my eyes flickered open, blinking against the bright lights. My entire body felt numb, and my vision felt no better, as I could only make out blurs of gray. However, as my vision cleared, I found myself hardly fazed by the bright lights in the white ceiling. “Since when could I stare at a light without blinking?” I asked, immediately widening my eyes at what I just said. “Did I just-“ I paused, scared at what I heard. “What’s wrong with…my voice?”

I turned my head away from the lights, taking notice to my surroundings. Everything was white. The walls were completely white, and I would have thought I was in heaven if there wasn’t an outline of a door to where I looked. Aside from the door, I realized my head was on a white pillow, while the rest of my body seemed to be missing. As I began to panic, I noticed a few ruffles of white appear before me, realizing a white blanket simply hid the rest of me. I sighed, thinking of how silly I was, but then, I couldn’t help but laugh a bit.

What…am I doing here? Oh well, I’ll get up and find my parents. Wait…

Everything came back to me instantly, the sounds of the man’s gun, and the bloody sensation against my back. I stared blankly at the ceiling, hyperventilating with each new memory that came back to me, to the point where I began feeling the dizzy. Immediately, I tried shaking off the blanket over me, which only brought pain across my body. After several jerks of pain, the blanket fell off of me, towards the floor, with black stains hidden on its under-side. I felt like throwing up at what I saw.

Several small, transparent tubes stemmed out from my arms and chest, each filled with a different color. As if to add more to my distress, a man in a white coat now entered the room, completely unaware of my present state. When he looked at me, he dropped a syringe he had in his hand, immediately fumbling out of the room in fear almost while shouting hysterically, “Subject Thirteen’s awake! Subject Thirteen’s awake!” Out of panic, I tried tearing off all the tubes across my body, and after doing so with many shrieks of pain, I got out of the bed. The man, being as helpful as ever, shrieked, “Someone, please, get in this room! I’m about to die! I have a wife! Subject Thirteen is leaving the bloody, damn room!

How did you like Step Brothers? i think i'ts hilarious when when Will Ferrel's character "t-bags" the other's drum set..XD so funny

Oh gawd...It was too much to handle. ANd yeah, it was epic, another post coming soon. (Sis stole laptop, so I got delayed yet again! D:)

then i'll read it in the mornin'...i need to go to bed, i've got school tomorrow..T-T and i hope i get sick or sleep in, 'cause i don't really want to go...

Oh, yeowch >< Sorry for the delay then! D: Here's the rest of it as well!


I cried, “Shut up!” as I began ran past him, wanting to get out of this…facility. My insides twirled as several doors sped by me, making me feel like I was in an endless loop, having no hope to get out. On top of that, I was freezing under the cold air, and at the time, I was naked. Ugh, could my life get any better at this point?

Yet, despite all of this, all I could think about was how I ran. Since when could I run this fast? How am I able to stride this far? Why do I feel taller? I began losing focus on the white hallway filled with white doors, as I began looking down at the white floor, noticing how far from it I was. Just like that, I began cramping up and tripped on the floor, as several footsteps went towards my direction.

I lost the strength to get back up, only getting sicker and sicker. I began shrieking in pain as several men now surrounded me. All they did was look down upon me as I screamed in the highest of pitches.

“Subject Thirteen has awakened.”

“Waiting for you orders, sir.”

“Just hold on. This will prove…interesting.”

I closed my eyes, hoping the pain would go away. The floor felt colder than ever. My whole body curled up into a ball, as the pain slowly faded now. Soon, everything began to clear up within me. No more cramps, no more pain.

I opened my eyes, and there the men stood. All of them were in white coats like the first one I saw, and they all were…looking at me oddly. Some looked scared, while others looked with awe. The rest…looked sickly with silence. One even threw up to the side. I simply rubbed my face when my arm, as they all behaved strangely.

Then, I wish my hand didn’t touch the floor. By my leg to be specific, because the same moist feeling I felt when my parents died filled the palm of my hand. Except, rather than seeing red, I only saw a black puddle, staining my hand with a smeared black. I began hyperventilating as I looked at myself now, realizing how thin my arms and legs were, as well as to their unusually long length. And how my body was so lean now, and...and…gracious…I did not have anything between my legs.

My body weakened now. I felt like fainting, but then, I saw something in all the blackness. I looked into it closer, seeing a pale, white head look back at me, with violet eyes and snow-white hair. Her hair was awfully long…No…No….I did not say that.

I slowly reached for my hair, as the face now looked at me with worry. A hand appeared in the black puddle, to which the men now began whispering to one another.

“Do you think Subject Thirteen is now aware of-?”

“Of course, she is to be the best there is now.”

“Amazing, how quickly she has grown.”

Their words began turning into gurgles as my vision blurred while staring into my reflection. My breathing rate increased even more now. Within seconds, the scientists began staring at me once more, cutting off all chatter, as I gagged repeatedly as both tears and snot came down my face. I fell on my side, after vomiting black and red.

I want to die.

you ended that with such a pretty picture...ugh, now i'm gonna barf; pretty good nonetheless. Can't wait for more.

Like I said :3

Felix Wing wrote:

Very last line. And what did you think of the story? This is like, a whole new style I'm adopting....for a short period of time, cuz it's a bastard child

would be a pretty good way to end Chapter 3...

Chapter 4 may be up by tomorrow by nine. Since, I have nothing to do during lunch tomorrow. =P
And I'm a little lost at what you meant by "Would be a pretty good way to end Chapter 3." >_<

i wasn't sure if that was the end of Chapter 3 or not...so i used "would" 'cause that is how i would end a chapter...without any answers..only joking