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PostSubject: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:45 am

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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PostSubject: Re: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Tue Oct 04, 2011 5:48 pm

what is that from?..the pic

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PostSubject: Re: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Tue Oct 04, 2011 6:09 pm

"Borrowed from Newgrounds"

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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PostSubject: Re: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Wed Oct 05, 2011 5:02 pm

i read that part, but like any specific vid or something? it looks familiar...

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PostSubject: Re: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Wed Oct 05, 2011 7:21 pm

Evil Glare search in Google Images?

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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PostSubject: Re: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Thu Oct 06, 2011 3:33 pm

wait...then what did you borrow from NewGrounds?

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PostSubject: Re: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Thu Oct 06, 2011 6:19 pm

The picture... >_>

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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PostSubject: Re: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Thu Oct 06, 2011 8:48 pm

*clicks on spoiler bar*

I'll read it later.

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PostSubject: Re: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Thu Oct 06, 2011 9:45 pm

I noticed how painful it is to read as well Very Happy Hopefully will fix this up by Saturday.

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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PostSubject: Re: Give me proper feedback damnitz (New Story: Angel of Atlantis)   Wed Jan 18, 2012 2:08 pm

Kay, fk it, I'm deleting this Very Happy

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"At the end of the desperate paradise,I seek the lost voice. I am fated to wander from street to street, further and further away.
In the shadow of the closed history, I long for the stolen days. The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering.
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise. It is distorted with voices and keeps vanishing away.
I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands, not hesitating to get hurt." -Len Kagamine, Paradise of Light and Shadow.
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