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FlaccidSquid
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PostSubject: Epic Sci-Fi/Fantasy Novella Feedback   Mon Mar 17, 2014 1:00 am

So, this is where I intend to have feedback, suggestions, and questions for and aboutmy ideas. I'm a better writer than in the current background I'm giving about the story, as well as these descriptions...sorry. Anyway, I would greatly appreciate feedback, and I welcome constructive criticism...but please be constructive and not insulting, I have some issues with that. Thanks everybody I appreciate everything~~


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PostSubject: Re: Epic Sci-Fi/Fantasy Novella Feedback   Mon Mar 17, 2014 1:07 am

What I said on Skype, just to keep it better organized:

I really like the idea. I'd want to say somewhere between 300 to 400 years for the backstory to begin. It almost sounds like you're going to write a trilogy from this info alone Or is this somehow going to fit into one book? 

Also, Gargantia. First thing that popped in my head when you brought up the creation of superhumans I definitely recommend that for a watch (again, no source material, anime came first. Sorry if this makes your anime list bigger ^^Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Epic Sci-Fi/Fantasy Novella Feedback   Mon Mar 17, 2014 11:14 am

Yea the background to this story is rather immense, and if the girl that was born is the main character, it's going to not work if you write the story linearly. If you share the background story in bits and pieces, it could work. Or you can make the background an entire separate book.

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